Excellent effort Shreya. The 100 Word challenge showed you were able to write a complete story in 100 words. This is your first effort, using a picture to inspire you. You will need to continue to work on making the story make sense and flow, while still telling a story. You will get better at selecting words and making the story interesting to the reader.
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Excellent effort Shreya. The 100 Word challenge showed you were able to write a complete story in 100 words. This is your first effort, using a picture to inspire you. You will need to continue to work on making the story make sense and flow, while still telling a story. You will get better at selecting words and making the story interesting to the reader.
Miss H
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