Friday 14 November 2014

My Tagul

 My poem
presents for everyone
santa hats for all
wrapping everywhere
santa's red coat 
eating lots and lots of candy canes
elves making presents  
mrs claus making treats
Sata saying ho ho ho merry christmas 
sneak peeks at night 


  


My reflection:I am proud of my self because I had to redo  my tagul
 three times but I still did not give up
It was a bit tricky
 because it took time think of words that explane
 christmas.
   







  






Friday 19 September 2014

Learning to Write a Narrative: The Musical Cockroach

The Musical Cockroach
  1. click above to read the story



My Reflection:
I am proud of my self because I have worked really hard on this topic. It was a little bit tricky to write some parts of the story. Next time I will try make it longer. I needed a tiny bit of help on writing this. 

Friday 5 September 2014

making a cube

My finished cube


My class decided to make cubes out of card-board. All of our class managed to make one cube.

reflection:I am proud of my self because I did not have any problems at all.This was pretty easy.Next time I might help some more people.


The cupcakes maths problems

Thursday 14 August 2014

My maths olympiad





I got this certificate because I took part in a maths olympiad. My team came third with 50  points. I think I did a good job because worked as a team.

Friday 8 August 2014

My foot investigation




My Reflection:
I am learning how to do a foot investigation.
I find this really easy because I used multiplication.
I used fractions as well.
I think I did a very good job.

Friday 4 July 2014

My Dream House at Te-'Tuhi

My Reflection :
I was learning to  make a dream house out of shapes. I am proud of how I  did my artwork  because I used different colours. Next time I will try harder.

Thursday 3 July 2014

Shreya's Maths Think Board




My Reflection: I have been learning how to use a maths think board to show my mathematical knowledge and understanding. I drew the problem in a simple way and showed how to use base ten equipment. Next time I will try write the way I solved the problem with words.

Wednesday 11 June 2014

The Best Birthday Present Ever



My Reflection:
I am proud of the way I did this problem.I thought this problem was easy. Next time I would like to move onto 3 digit numbers.





My Monthly Basic Facts Graph



My Reflection:

I am proud of how I have been getting faster.  I think I can 
work a bit harder next time.  It can be trick y to finish all the questions.



Thursday 5 June 2014

My Most Favourite Meal


My Most  Favourite Meal
Sniff sniff...I smell some bacon.  I quitely walk to the kitchen so my mum does not notice.  I take some bacon.   I feel my tummy rumble it 

is asking for bacon.The bacon smell permeated the house and made me feel ravenous.  Then I say to myself   why  don’t I make some scrambeled eggs on toast with bacon.First I make some mindblowing scrambeled eggs.Next I cook two piesses of crispy bacon I cant resist the smell of the bakon.Now I am feeling super hungry.Finally I get to eat my breakfast it smells really really really good.But I want eat my favourite food last. So I eat My crunchy toast.It tastes great.Next I eat My yummy scrambeled eggs.What I have been waiting for is finally here.I get to eat my bacon!!!
It tastes delicious fantastic really good mind-blowing great tasty and super.After breakfast I felt really really really really really really good.

My Reflection:

  I am proud of my writing because I used adjectives.It easy to do this sort of writing.I will try harder next time.

Wednesday 16 April 2014

My Big Sister

                             My Big Sister
My big sister has glasses.  She has  brown hair and brown eyes. Her interests are playing on her computer, sports,playing  on her I pod.  her name is Rishika. She is fun to play with.  She is good at cricket. She is really nice.     She has long hair.  She skipped year 4.  She comes up with amazing words.  She has a great personalty.  She likes the out doors.  she is a great sister to have.  She lots of medals for maths.  She is super smart.  She good reader. Her favourite is orange .  She is cool.  She likes the sun.  She has a red computer.  She is good at writing.


                                                                                 
 My Reflection:                                                       I am learning to describe a character. It cam be tricky to come up with lots of ideas.i am proud of the amount of describing words I used.  Next time I will try to get more ideas.

pedal power



                                   
                             My Reflection:
               
                 I  am learning to ride a bike. I am proud of the way rode                    I rode the bike. It was tricky trying to scoot but it was                        fun.Next time I will try harder at scooting.
                  
              














  

Friday 11 April 2014



Holding my award



 My Reflection:

I got this award because I had a tidy uniform.  I am happy to get this award.   This is my first award in Year 4.    



Tuesday 25 March 2014

learning to write reader's response





My Reflection:
I am learning to write reader's response. I am proud of my work because I thought of lots of ideas about the poem. We had to learn about when the poem was written to really understand it.
Next time I will think harder about what a poem is about. I think I did a very good job because I was inspired by this interesting poem.






Wednesday 19 March 2014

Shreya's venn diagram




My Reflection:
I am learning to use a venn diagram to compare 2 things. Iwas comparing two different styles of recount. It can be tricky to come up with lots of ideas. I am proud of the way I did my work. I am very proud of my work because I used lots of different ideas because I kept thinking of how they were different. 

Learning to write a recount as a poem

Did you ever..?
by Shreya

Did you ever go skiing at snowplanet?
cold as ice
heart pounding
body shaking




Did you ever dream of how cold snow can be?
snow melting
hands freezing
body shaking

I loved it.

Friday 14 March 2014

Learning to solve maths word problems

Learning to be a leader

                                   my reflection           

            I am proud of my self because I  have hosted 1                                school assembly. I was chosen because I am a good at                  thinking and I  listen all the time and I have a strong clear          voice.   

Wednesday 19 February 2014

My Welcome Post

My name is Shreya.  I go to Elm Park school and I am in Year four.  I have an e-portfolio because I want to share my learning.  My interests are skiing, netball, soccer, swimming, high jump, bike riding, cricket, badminton, and tennis.

I am looking forward to reading any comments you may post.
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