Wednesday 19 March 2014

Learning to write a recount as a poem

Did you ever..?
by Shreya

Did you ever go skiing at snowplanet?
cold as ice
heart pounding
body shaking




Did you ever dream of how cold snow can be?
snow melting
hands freezing
body shaking

I loved it.

1 comment:

Mrs Hodge said...

You have painted a wonderful picture with words. I enjoyed reading your lovely recount poem.